A story I've always wanted to write. It's gonna be super long though >.< I never finished. Please tell me what you think

I was lost deep in thought like always. I never saw the world the same as everyone else, I knew there was something wrong with it. I just didn't understand what. I know there's something missing and there were many lies that we didn't know of. I felt alone, I didn't know where to go or who to talk to. I sighed and slowly got out of my chair in class.
"May I go to the restroom?" I asked with no life in my words.
" Go ahead. Are you alright Asuka?" That's what people always seemed to ask me. If I was alright. I guess I never had life in my eyes. I wish I could find what was missing or what was wrong. I don't understand why no one else sees what I see. I need an adventure in my life. I have an empty space in my heart. I need to find something, I need true excitement that makes my heart drop and race. Why can other people be so happy with nothing? What do I have to think so deeply about things?
I walked through the schools endless and empty hallway until I got to the bathroom door. But something caught my eye. Something was different or out of place. I looked from the corner of my eyes but I didn't see anything out of place. I pushed the bathroom door opened still searching for something out of place from the corner of my eyes. One of bathroom stalls slowly closed, but it wasn't anything that interested me. These kinds of things always happen at our school. Unknown noises would haunt the students ears and shadows made from nothing would quickly fly past the walls. I always tried to find an explanation, but these kinds of things don't just happen anywhere. Even though I would grow fear each time these things happened I enjoyed it. It was pleasing to my empty heart to have some feelings. I decided not to go to the restroom and quickly walked out of the bathroom.

(More to come later, going to sleep hehe. I hope it wasn't to boring)

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

Are you sure? Is there anything I should fix or do?

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

Are you sure? Is there anything I should fix or do?

I just don't like it in paragragh form like that...... LAWL

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

Are you sure? Is there anything I should fix or do?

I just don't like it in paragragh form like that...... LAWL

Well it's in paragraph form because it's not a manga. It's an actual written story

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

Are you sure? Is there anything I should fix or do?

I just don't like it in paragragh form like that...... LAWL

Well it's in paragraph form because it's not a manga. It's an actual written story

I know~ I just don't like it in paragraph form 0.0

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

Are you sure? Is there anything I should fix or do?

I just don't like it in paragragh form like that...... LAWL

Well it's in paragraph form because it's not a manga. It's an actual written story

I know~ I just don't like it in paragraph form 0.0

--_-- LOL BOB stories are suppose to be in paragraph form

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

xXAiInuXx520 wrote:

BunBun wrote:

0.0 WRITE MORE BOB MORE~!!!!
it doesn't matter if it's long as long as it's interesting we'll read it =D
:Innocent: :

Haha Okay I will. This is the story from Extended Core that I never finished for Mr. Dougan

So far it's pretty interesting 0.0

Are you sure? Is there anything I should fix or do?

I just don't like it in paragragh form like that...... LAWL

Well it's in paragraph form because it's not a manga. It's an actual written story

I know~ I just don't like it in paragraph form 0.0

--_-- LOL BOB stories are suppose to be in paragraph form

Depends =D