More Failing maps T.T

This is suppost to be like a really big closet for a queen
https://2img.net/h/i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk222/MyRaInBoWs/Bandstory%20Maps/clotheroom.png

This is a fail kitchen still unfinished
https://2img.net/h/i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk222/MyRaInBoWs/Bandstory%20Maps/Kitchen.png

I have no idea what I should name this one -I used it for mothers day vid-
https://2img.net/h/i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk222/MyRaInBoWs/Bandstory%20Maps/mothersdayroom.png

This is where I used my chair -its a little pixally-
https://2img.net/h/i281.photobucket.com/albums/kk222/MyRaInBoWs/Bandstory%20Maps/screen.jpg

-credit me if you feel that one of my maps is good enough for a second look at-

For the first map's a nice idea, really like the wood figures o:
It's plain though, especially the wall. It also needs shadows.
Some more objects, as maybe a mirror would be good too.

The second map is unfinished so I wont really comment anything about that.

Third room needs shadows, except that it's very plain o:

Last one needs a better wall, too plain. Maybe some lights could be good. And some chairs facing the other way would be great o:

I'm not one to give CnC about maps, haha. I love them all. c:

the last one's jpg. can you change it to png? otherwise, they're beautiful maps (:

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For the first map's a nice idea, really like the wood figures o:
It's plain though, especially the wall. It also needs shadows.
Some more objects, as maybe a mirror would be good too.

The second map is unfinished so I wont really comment anything about that.

Third room needs shadows, except that it's very plain o:

Last one needs a better wall, too plain. Maybe some lights could be good. And some chairs facing the other way would be great o:

Do you have a mirror? I've been looking for one but I gave up since no one else had one

for the second one, did you draw the sink and refrigator?

no =/